Comments for Dingzzzz http://dingz.wordpress.com Not just another WordPress.com weblog Sat, 23 Aug 2008 17:44:22 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Last blog post for storytelling :( by Scopelenz http://dingz.wordpress.com/2008/08/04/last-blog-post-for-storytelling/#comment-31 Scopelenz Sat, 23 Aug 2008 17:44:22 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?p=59#comment-31 Interesting perspective, but regardless, please be wary of the comments which you are making on the blogosphere! You never know who may be watching... Nonetheless, this truly refutes the usual attitude which you pick up when I see you online. Haha perhaps an alter-ego? :D Interesting perspective, but regardless, please be wary of the comments which you are making on the blogosphere! You never know who may be watching…

Nonetheless, this truly refutes the usual attitude which you pick up when I see you online. Haha perhaps an alter-ego? :D

]]> Comment on Dialogue by theredpants http://dingz.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-30 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 03:42:49 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=55#comment-30 Good dialogue. Very realistic and well acted out. The tension in the piece is also apparent. Good work. Good dialogue. Very realistic and well acted out. The tension in the piece is also apparent. Good work.

]]> Comment on Letter to the past. by theredpants http://dingz.wordpress.com/letter-to-the-past/#comment-29 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 03:39:13 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=41#comment-29 Interesting character - however, this is not a letter. The assignment is "Letter to the Past" and so should be in the form of a letter to this person. I would've liked to see a letter to this cheery man - would've been really interesting. Interesting character – however, this is not a letter. The assignment is “Letter to the Past” and so should be in the form of a letter to this person. I would’ve liked to see a letter to this cheery man – would’ve been really interesting.

]]> Comment on Visual Trigger by theredpants http://dingz.wordpress.com/visual-trigger/#comment-28 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 03:37:12 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=37#comment-28 This story roughly follows the conventions of greek tragedy. I can see the tragic fall of Ong Aileen and then her realization and the reversal of fortune. However, the bad point of the story is that it is quite predictable and very generic. This story roughly follows the conventions of greek tragedy. I can see the tragic fall of Ong Aileen and then her realization and the reversal of fortune. However, the bad point of the story is that it is quite predictable and very generic.

]]> Comment on People-stalk by theredpants http://dingz.wordpress.com/people-stalk/#comment-27 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 03:32:30 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=23#comment-27 There is very little about the physicality of the two characters in your descriptions and I would've liked to see more of that. Also, your thoughts on their actions and behaviour are quite scant and not nearly deep enough to give you material for development. There is very little about the physicality of the two characters in your descriptions and I would’ve liked to see more of that. Also, your thoughts on their actions and behaviour are quite scant and not nearly deep enough to give you material for development.

]]> Comment on Short Stories by theredpants http://dingz.wordpress.com/short-stories/#comment-26 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 03:25:56 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=14#comment-26 Your story endings are quite random in nature and content and while oftentimes this is used to effect dramatic irony, I don't think these quite work that way here. However, this takes practice - keep at it and you'll achieve it over time. Your story endings are quite random in nature and content and while oftentimes this is used to effect dramatic irony, I don’t think these quite work that way here. However, this takes practice – keep at it and you’ll achieve it over time.

]]> Comment on Last blog post for storytelling :( by theredpants http://dingz.wordpress.com/2008/08/04/last-blog-post-for-storytelling/#comment-25 theredpants Tue, 05 Aug 2008 08:04:34 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?p=59#comment-25 Harsh words, my friend. Say what you like, the MDA's played a big part over the years in giving us money to make films, to move our media industry and fund our content and if you were a film student like I was 10 years ago, I'd say we've come a long way! We have a long road yet to travel and it's going to be bumpy but I say stop complaining, let's make the change we want to see, from the inside, not the outside. So I'll advise you to join the MDA eventually, and work your changes from within the organization - that's the best way I know how. Harsh words, my friend. Say what you like, the MDA’s played a big part over the years in giving us money to make films, to move our media industry and fund our content and if you were a film student like I was 10 years ago, I’d say we’ve come a long way! We have a long road yet to travel and it’s going to be bumpy but I say stop complaining, let’s make the change we want to see, from the inside, not the outside. So I’ll advise you to join the MDA eventually, and work your changes from within the organization – that’s the best way I know how.

]]> Comment on Truth or false. by dingz http://dingz.wordpress.com/truth-or-false/#comment-18 dingz Mon, 02 Jun 2008 18:21:48 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=44#comment-18 Sorry guys, second is a farking lie. I never had such luck in my life, despite the amount of good deeds i've done. Sorry guys, second is a farking lie. I never had such luck in my life, despite the amount of good deeds i’ve done.

]]> Comment on Truth or false. by aileen http://dingz.wordpress.com/truth-or-false/#comment-17 aileen Tue, 27 May 2008 07:03:42 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=44#comment-17 2nd is true 2nd is true

]]> Comment on Truth or false. by dingz http://dingz.wordpress.com/truth-or-false/#comment-16 dingz Tue, 27 May 2008 07:03:13 +0000 http://dingz.wordpress.com/?page_id=44#comment-16 Oops sorry AitGah. Made the amendment. Oops sorry AitGah. Made the amendment.

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